[David Maroul]

Hey Michael, Nice track! I listened on my little Logotech computer speakers. ( I found these give me a great representation of how the majority of listeners hear a track, between earbuds and smaller speakers) Obviously these smaller speaker give little in the way of low end so I won’t reference that.

Otherwise, I agree with Dana. I would love to hear the vocals sitting in their own carved out space ( not competing so much with the instrumentation in the same EQ freq range).

This mix/production reminded of something like Scandal “The Warrior” or “Goodbye To You” from the early 80’s (I’m old) So, that might be helpful as a reference (in matching eq etc).

Overall great work. 🙌 Can’t wait to hear the final version. All the best! 😃

[David Maroul]

Cool! 😃

[David Maroul]

Thanks @smoothygroove !

[David Maroul]

It sounds really good, Nathaniel. From 2:51 – out is what really grabbed me & stuck in my head.

All the best!

[David Maroul]

Nice!